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October 5, 2021

Beam marketing email grammar/misspellings?

  • October 5, 2021
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C’mon Sonos - you can do better than this:

“Smarter on the inside and more beautiful on the outisde for exceptional sound all around.” (one sentence to describe the beam and wow, it’s a doozy)

“Jonatan” (no way is that someone’s real name

I’m not a grammar police type person, but geez, I expect better from a company I’m so invested in.  Let me know if you need someone to proof your stuff - I’d be happy to help.  :)

 

 

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    James L.
    Retired Community Staff
    October 7, 2021

    Hey @mansolil,

     

    Thanks for flagging the mistakes you've spotted in the email for Beam (Gen 2). I’ve passed the comments made in this thread over to our marketing team.

     

    I must admit, this thread made me chuckle :smile:

     

    Oh, yes, the most important issue.

     

    I can indeed confirm that Jonatan is real, and not a typo! :laughing:

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    Senior Virtuoso
    October 7, 2021

    Hey @mansolil,

     

    Thanks for flagging the mistakes you've spotted in the email for Beam (Gen 2). I’ve passed the comments made in this thread over to our marketing team.

     

    I must admit, this thread made me chuckle :smile:

     

    Oh, yes, the most important issue.

     

    I can indeed confirm that Jonatan is real, and not a typo! :laughing:


    Please say “hi” to him from me/us all. I’m sure he’ll be pleased to know he’s not a typo! Have you told him, or did he already know? 😜 

    James L.
    Retired Community Staff
    October 7, 2021

    Please say “hi” to him from me/us all. I’m sure he’ll be pleased to know he’s not a typo! Have you told him, or did he already know? 😜 

    Haha, I’m sure he already knows, but if he ever stumble across this thread by Googling his own name, he’ll get the confirmation right here :grinning:

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    melvimbe
    October 7, 2021

    Oh, yes, the most important issue.

     

    The above is not a complete sentence.  Where’s the verb?  :rolling_eyes:

    Danny
    Senior Virtuoso
    October 7, 2021

    Oh, yes, the most important issue.

     

    The above is not a complete sentence.  Where’s the verb?  :rolling_eyes:


    Maybe he meant to use a colon?