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Beam marketing email grammar/misspellings?

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C’mon Sonos - you can do better than this:

“Smarter on the inside and more beautiful on the outisde for exceptional sound all around.” (one sentence to describe the beam and wow, it’s a doozy)

“Jonatan” (no way is that someone’s real name

I’m not a grammar police type person, but geez, I expect better from a company I’m so invested in. Let me know if you need someone to proof your stuff - I’d be happy to help. :)

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James L.

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Hey @mansolil,

Thanks for flagging the mistakes you've spotted in the email for Beam (Gen 2). I’ve passed the comments made in this thread over to our marketing team.

I must admit, this thread made me chuckle :smile:

Oh, yes, the most important issue.

I can indeed confirm that Jonatan is real, and not a typo! :laughing:

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